Plz help me!!! i cheated on my bf!!!?

Um... your poem is not that bad. It's kinda cute. But i'm a writer in our school paper. And i am igned in the part where poems are. The literary section i mean. You should follow the 8-12-8-12 syllable pattern per line. Or the 8 syllable pattern, or the 12 syllable pattern. It's much better if you revise it. Because it's kind of confusing to see the next line long and the other line short. So revise it. :D